"Hey Tina Cassidy thanks for writing Birth. Your idea that a natural process which women are capable of doing on their own has turned into a nightmarish industrial atrocity, persuaded me to think differently about hospital births."
Tina:
"Really, which parts were most effective or important for you?"
"Well, in the last third of the book you focused on postpartum depression and the history of a fathers role in the birthing process, which have outstanding connections to the first 2/3rd of the book. More specifically, the historical aspect of men being aloud in the birth place. I found it interesting that since ancient times fathers did not participate in the birthing process.(p.32) These women had no option of the support of a father. So why is it that modern women find it easer to give birth with there husbands present. (p.198)
2. The placenta cocktail mentioned in page 219 most definitely caught my attention. With all due respect it made me want to barf. But then i thought about how most mammals do this. They just don't mix it with ice and V-8 juice."
Tina:
"But what could I have done to make this a better book - that would more effectively fulfill its mission?"
"Well, let's be clear - your text sought to provide narratives, historical analysis, journalistic analysis and policy analysis from the perspective of (doctors, mothers, fathers and more) for the book-reading-public to better understand pregnancy & birth in our culture. Given that aim, and your book, the best advice I would give for a 2nd edition of the text would be, to add to your appendix. I loved having the information about maternal death but seeing more statistics may have been useful. For example, I would have liked to see statistics on infant mortality by nation, and breast feeding verses non-breast feeding infant health. But I don't want you to feel like I'm criticizing. I appreciate the immense amount of labor you dedicated to this important issue and particularly for making me think about the women whose child was devoured by a rat in the primitive days of hospital births & causing me to think about the benefits of a home birth. In fact, I'm likely to visit a birthing ward and volunteer with new born babes as a result of your book. This will not only give me good experience but i will also use this as a way of learning more about the topic."
Tina:
"Thanks! Talking to you give me hope about our future as a society!"