Wednesday, November 3, 2010


Hw 12

Thesis: Americans are under the false impression that the nightmarish industrial atrocities are necessary for maintaining our culture.

Claim 1Americans are in denial:

Americans are not healthy-http://newsroom.cigna.com/article_display.cfm?article_id=720

They believe they are-
http://www.consumerreports.org/health/doctors-hospitals/health-care-security/overview/health-care-security-ov.htm

They are truly unhealthy:
http://www.huffingtonpost.com/maria-rodale/the-true-cost-of-doubt-an_b_581514.html


CLAIM 2 Things can change:

Growth of green market-http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2010/08/29/sunday/main6816240.shtml

Other nations-
http://www.arla.com/
http://www.foodoresund.com/composite-313.htm

1 comment:

  1. Thesis & claims seem powerful to me.

    Missing argument.

    It should be
    Thesis
    Argument
    Claim 1
    Evidence
    Claim 2
    Evidence

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